Full application audit

Your personal statement says medicine found you through your grandmother. Your fifteen activities are about research. Both are true and neither knows about the other, and the person reading them has your whole file open at once. This is the audit that reads them together.

Price: $199
Covers: Statement + all activities
Turnaround: 7 business days, or 2 days expedited
Format: Written

Buy the audit, $199

What you get

Everything in the statement audit, then the other fourteen thousand characters.

The complete personal statement audit. Two reads, three-color annotation, named strengths, prioritized top three.
All fifteen activities reviewed. Every entry, not a sample.
Your most-meaningful three assessed. Whether you picked the right ones, and whether the extra characters are earning their place. This is the decision most applicants make last and should make first.
A cross-document consistency read. Whether the story your statement tells and the story your activities tell are the same story.
Written feedback on the primary as a whole, rather than fifteen separate verdicts you have to assemble yourself.

The consistency read is the part you cannot do yourself. You wrote each piece weeks apart and you know what you meant, so the gaps close in your head automatically. They do not close for a stranger reading all of it in eleven minutes.

personal_statement_v3.docx

Must change Reconsider Working

Ever since I was a child, I have wanted to be a doctor. I volunteered at NewYork-Presbyterian for two years, where I learned the value of compassion. Mrs. Okafor asked me to read her discharge papers out loud because she had left her glasses in the ambulance.

Hover a sentence to see why it is marked.

Must change Eleven words, and roughly a third of your competition opens with some version of them. An admissions reader has seen this sentence today already. You have not told them anything only you could say.

Reconsider Two years is real and worth keeping. "The value of compassion" is not, because you are telling the reader a conclusion instead of handing them the evidence and letting them reach it.

Working This is your opening. It is specific, it could only be yours, and it earns in one sentence what the two above it only claimed.

Illustration of our annotation standard. Not a client document.

Add-ons

Applying TMDSAS or AACOMAS as well?

Neither is a copy and paste of AMCAS, and treating them that way is one of the more expensive mistakes in this process. Each add-on is $80 on top of the full audit.

TMDSAS add-on

$80$279 together with the full audit

Both additional essays audited
Both short-answer prompts audited
Activity entries re-cut to the TMDSAS structure

Add TMDSAS at checkout

AACOMAS add-on

$80$279 together with the full audit

Osteopathic-fit screen on the personal statement
Activities re-cut to 600 characters
Experiences and achievements separated properly
Hours de-duplicated across categories, which is where most AACOMAS applications quietly go wrong

Add AACOMAS at checkout

Before you buy

The questions we actually get.

What does this add over the statement audit?

All fifteen activities, your most-meaningful three, and a consistency read across the whole primary.

The consistency read is the part that earns the difference, because it catches things neither document shows on its own.

How are the activities marked up?

The same standard as the statement: marked and explained, with a reason on every mark.

On the TMDSAS and AACOMAS add-ons we also re-cut each entry to that system's character limit.

How soon do I get it back?

Within seven business days of our receiving all of your materials, which is not the same as seven days from when you buy. If an activity entry is still being written, the clock starts when the last piece reaches us.

Need it sooner? Add Expedited Service at checkout for $50 and it comes back within 2 calendar days, or the $50 is refunded.

Free consultation

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Fifteen minutes. Tell us where you are and we will tell you which one we would buy in your position.

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